Improvements:
-Intro hard too read, slow it down.
-Start Feature Film with title.
-Non- Realistic punching.
-Need to have same track throughout film.
-Too Comical needs to be more serious.
-Only Black and white edit to the film, to allow consistency throughout the film.
-Have a montage of shots to show bits of fight.
-Prepare, plan choreography to show planning evidence.
-Fighting match was the flaw of the movie.
-Prologue text (Change first part of it to 'Brave but penniless man') to show the flaw of his character.
-Show the main character in the 'prolougue text'
Good Points:
-First music piece was good, should carry on throughout.
-Good lighting shown on the video.
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