- Intro of movie text re-write
- Change transitions to consistent style
- Have a montage of video shots to establish genre
- Cut the ending and have no Led Zepilliin
- Get more shots of realistic punching
- Take away all music except the Metallica song, and play until film ends
- keep whole movie black and white
- Production company should be at the start of the movie
- Slow the prologue text down
- Different colour font for production company
You haven't stated whether these "improvements" were decided upon as a result of audience feedback.
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